
Awakening
A LitRPG Story (Outworld, Book 1)
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Narrated by:
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Joshua Story
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By:
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Mrdojo
About this listen
What do you desire in exchange for your soul? Everlasting youth? A million dollars? Women? Power?
Bored high-schooler Adam Staples wants for nothing. Such an offer could only be a prank, right? Who would have thought that the prankster is a demon in disguise?
After selling his soul and turning into a half-demon, Adam finds himself orphaned and dragged into a realm outside of the world he knew. Training under his benefactor and enrolling in a school made for those who were gifted with powers, Adam ventures around the Outworld to hunt down the demon that turned his life inside out...and perhaps to squash a bit of the guilt he carries for what he had done to his family.
©2020 Mrdojo (P)2020 Podium Audiobad guys were all from one template ... 'i am unbeatable you minnow!' types
everyone is confused and the word 'huh' is definitely overused when the battles commence ... use a thesaurus mate!
if you can get over new enemies appearing for no apparent reason and the mostly unexplained 7 year gap in narrative while the mc achieves his superpowers the story is okay but I'm
not sure I'd rush out to buy book 2.
Too much 'huh?'
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totally gripping
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came back to this book.....
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The plot is ok, but the execution is terrible. The pacing is terrible and used time skip all the time 2 weeks past, 5 hour past etc etc. and finally 7 year past, all the while when the MC stats increase and he get his power. No explaination at all until 6 hours in. This is suppose to be a litrpg and it skip it. Wow.
So what do you get to know is 6 hours? Nothing! There is only some random events that brings nothing to the story. The MC cluelessly moves forward with plotarmor. There is a few hints of people or things. But obly hints, no developement at all. Its super annoying. After 6 hours (25%) I know nothing about the MC or otherwise.
Oh yeah, his 7 year long master send him to school (after 5 hours of nothing) without a clue of the academy, the world or any rules. That is great as on his first day he has to fuse with demon to not get killed, after he passes out. Nothing strange to see here. The master couldn't help with that? Further more, he finds a slume and a big explosion destroys have the school and he passes out again. He actually passes out once an hour for the first 5 hour and gets to a dream world (which ofc is explained either). Horrible just horrible writing!! Dropped!
Just horrible. Series dropped at 6 hours!
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